Build an obstacle and meaningful choice
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An original 600–900-word story with a character want, obstacle, consequential choice, two revised passages and an editing note.
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What to include
- Compose an original 600–900-word story or clearly stated accessible equivalent.
- Show a character want, meaningful obstacle and choice with consequence.
- Maintain an intentionally chosen viewpoint.
- Include two before/after passages and specific edit reasons.
Review and revise
Use these criteria to check your work and choose what to improve.
- Story causality: decisions lead to consequences.
- Craft: viewpoint and scene/summary choices serve the event.
- Originality: text is learner-created, not copied source fiction.
- Revision: evidence shows specific changes and their effects.
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The idea in everyday life
An obstacle should test the want already established. A coincidence can start a story, but repeated coincidences that solve its central problem prevent the character’s choice from mattering. Link events with because/therefore during planning, then remove those scaffolding words when the prose does not need them.
A turning point changes the available options.
Build an obstacle and meaningful choice — worked practice
A turning point changes the available options.
Mira finds Jo’s note: “Donor wishes title confirmed before display.” The note removes the easy option of guessing. Mira can display an unverified label, delay the display, or ask Jo to stay two minutes and miss an earlier bus. She chooses to admit the skipped notes and delay one card. Jo leaves a verification route before departing; the display opens with a visible “title being checked” space. Mira obtains an accurate partial display at the cost of an imperfect finish.
1. 4.1 Build
Draw four boxes: established want, new obstacle, available options, chosen action/consequence. Use the supplied donor note, which changes what a responsible display can show.
You should see: The note blocks guessing as an accurate route.
2. 4.2 Build
Give at least two options a specific cost. Avoid an obviously free perfect option that makes the choice meaningless.
You should see: Delay risks the promised finish; guessing risks credit.
3. 4.3 Build
Draft 100–150 words around the choice. Include the action that makes it irreversible, such as replacing an invented label with a pending-title card.
You should see: Mira visibly replaces the label.
4. 4.4 Build
Write the next event as a consequence of that action. Change the donor note to permit anonymous display; explain how that changed input alters the options instead of replaying the same turning point.
You should see: Permission for anonymous display changes the decision boundary.
What to finish
A causal choice map and a drafted turning-point passage.
Watch for this
A lucky stranger supplies the answer immediately, making the main character’s decision irrelevant.
How can I tell I understand it?
The outcome follows from the choice and preserves its cost.
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Read public discussion of setting and plot links; this course uses its own original fictional clockwork-library scenario.
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