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Choose a viewpoint and scene boundary

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An original 600–900-word story with a character want, obstacle, consequential choice, two revised passages and an editing note.

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What to include

  • Compose an original 600–900-word story or clearly stated accessible equivalent.
  • Show a character want, meaningful obstacle and choice with consequence.
  • Maintain an intentionally chosen viewpoint.
  • Include two before/after passages and specific edit reasons.

Review and revise

Use these criteria to check your work and choose what to improve.

  • Story causality: decisions lead to consequences.
  • Craft: viewpoint and scene/summary choices serve the event.
  • Originality: text is learner-created, not copied source fiction.
  • Revision: evidence shows specific changes and their effects.
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The idea in everyday life

A close third-person passage uses the character’s name and follows that character’s available perceptions and thoughts. It can report another person’s gestures without asserting their private thoughts. Summary compresses uneventful time; a scene expands a meaningful exchange. Choose these deliberately rather than assuming every minute deserves equal space.

The idea

Viewpoint limits what the narration can know.

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Choose a viewpoint and scene boundary — worked practice

Viewpoint limits what the narration can know.

Draft: “Mira pressed the drawer shut. Jo hated being ignored and planned to leave.” In Mira’s close viewpoint the second sentence asserts unavailable thoughts. Revision: “Mira pressed the drawer shut. Jo checked the bus timetable on the wall. Mira could not tell whether that glance was a warning.” Summary bridge: “For the next ten minutes, Mira checked three drawers.” Scene resumes when she finds the donation note folded behind a divider.

  1. 1. 3.1 Choose

    Underline what Mira can see/hear in the supplied passage; circle her thoughts separately. Mark Jo’s private plan as unavailable to this selected viewpoint.

    You should see: Drawer/timetable are observable; Jo’s hidden plan is not.

  2. 2. 3.2 Choose

    Rewrite the unsupported sentence using a visible action and Mira’s uncertainty. Keep the uncertainty; a gesture is evidence of behavior, not certain access to another mind.

    You should see: An uncertain interpretation replaces mind-reading.

  3. 3. 3.3 Choose

    List three events in your draft. Expand the event containing the difficult exchange into 120–180 words; compress uneventful searching into one or two summary sentences.

    You should see: Search time is compressed; the crucial exchange is expanded.

  4. 4. 3.4 Choose

    Mark where the scene begins and ends, including any time jump. Re-read the passage to verify that narrator knowledge does not jump to Jo without an intentional viewpoint change.

    You should see: One viewpoint governs the passage.

Now change one thing

New close-viewpoint character Nia sees Eli turn a key, but nobody has told her why. Classify “Eli turned the key” as observable or motive.

Your work

What to finish

A marked viewpoint audit and a 120–180-word scene with a summary bridge.

Common mistake

Watch for this

Changing narrator knowledge mid-paragraph while believing a name change is enough to signal it.

How can I tell I understand it?

You can justify which facts the chosen narrator knows.

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Quick knowledge check

Answer all 3 questions. Get at least 2 right and the lesson completes automatically.

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1Which sentence stays within Mira’s close third-person knowledge?
2Which event should receive scene detail in a 600–900-word version?
3“Ten minutes later, the labeled drawers stood empty.” What narrative function does this serve?
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Portland State University: EmpoWORD, Describing a Scene
Source & access notes · checked 2026-10-01

Read sensory imagery, precise nouns/verbs and purposeful description; original LifeStarter samples and exercises replace source activities.

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Reuse: Linked for further study. All LifeStarter scenarios, samples, assets and assessments are original; no source exercises or artwork are copied.

Open University: Creating characters
Source & access notes · checked 2026-10-01

Read the public character section and its discussion of character/event relationships through the web reader; linked source exercises are not reproduced.

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