Turn an observation into a premise
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An original 600–900-word story with a character want, obstacle, consequential choice, two revised passages and an editing note.
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What to include
- Compose an original 600–900-word story or clearly stated accessible equivalent.
- Show a character want, meaningful obstacle and choice with consequence.
- Maintain an intentionally chosen viewpoint.
- Include two before/after passages and specific edit reasons.
Review and revise
Use these criteria to check your work and choose what to improve.
- Story causality: decisions lead to consequences.
- Craft: viewpoint and scene/summary choices serve the event.
- Originality: text is learner-created, not copied source fiction.
- Revision: evidence shows specific changes and their effects.
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The idea in everyday life
A detail is a seed, not a complete plot. Separate what a fictional observer can see from what you invent, then add a want that can succeed or fail in a short time. Limit this first story to one afternoon and one room. You can invent everything; no personal disclosure or interviewing is needed.
An observation becomes a story when somebody must respond to it.
Turn an observation into a premise — worked practice
An observation becomes a story when somebody must respond to it.
Original seed: a drawer contains a single blank index card. Observation: the other cards have handwritten titles. Invention: Mira promised to finish the library display before closing. Premise: When the title card for a donated book vanishes, Mira must choose between inventing a title to finish her display and asking Jo for help, exposing that she ignored Jo’s notes. The obstacle changes her behavior; a list of drawer colors would not.
1. 1.1 Turn
Make two columns for the supplied detail: visible facts (one blank card, handwritten neighbors) and inventions (missing title, promise, ignored notes). Add two new invented explanations without calling them facts.
You should see: The blank card is visible; the explanation remains invention.
2. 1.2 Turn
Use the frame “When [change], [person who wants something] must [action] despite [obstacle].” Draft a premise from the blank card and then another from a locked cupboard.
You should see: Each premise specifies a want and an obstacle.
3. 1.3 Turn
Test each premise by naming a possible action and the cost of that action. “Mira feels bad” is a state; “Mira asks Jo to check the notes” can occur on the page.
You should see: Asking for help risks exposing the ignored notes.
4. 1.4 Turn
Choose one premise and restrict place/time/cast to a room, an afternoon and two people. Write a 60–100-word opening that includes an action rather than a biography.
You should see: A small cast and time window allow a complete short story.
What to finish
Two premise alternatives and a 60–100-word opening.
Watch for this
Treating an inferred cause as an observed fact, or writing a setting with no acting character.
How can I tell I understand it?
A reader can say who wants what and what makes action necessary.
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